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| JulieM 2006-01-16 ch 1,  | abuseYAY!I love a happy ending! Am loving your stories so far (This is the first I've read.) Please keep writing for our enjoyment! JulieM |
| JAGJenni 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseReally cute, thanks for posting it. |
| starryeyes10 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abusegreat story. |
| thelonelyone 2004-05-13 ch 1, | abusehappy happy joy joy happy happy joy joy happy happy joy joy joy... lol.. great story!! it made me all giddy and stuff... sweet... |
| Lisa Brown 2004-05-12 ch 1, | abuseBravo. |
| Mary Kate113 2004-05-01 ch 1, | abuseoh thats cute...but some how i wish he still would have gone to California and she would have gone with him! to me that would have been better! but this was a great story and you are a very talented writer! keep up the good work! |
| harmsgirl 2004-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story! There are a few errors...the new SecNav's name is Sheffield. The old one was Nelson and Harm and Mac are *not* in the same chain of command, they are under the same command. There is a difference! If you want it explained...e-mail me. |
| Angela B. 2004-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow cute! I am glad he didn't go to California...aren't his parents rich? Probably, has a trust fund, lucky SOB. His job is a great job though! |
| Jo Ann 2004-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseShort, sweet and made me smile. Thanks. Looking forward to reading more of your work. |
| ninjaturtle 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like it. Very good. Just watch out, there's a bit where the SECNAV was meant to say "dont screw it up" and said "do screw it up" |
| ScarlieBo 2004-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery sweet... wish things could work out so easily :D |
| Skates 2004-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThough I have no idea what happens after midway through season eight. I loved your idea of Mac going to the secNav and fighting to get Harm's job back. Great story. |
| SMKAngel 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI love this story it is beautiful. It is an amazing story. Are you going to build off of it? Please do there are many ways you could go and you are a great writer. |
| laura carr 2004-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story. |
| LizD 2004-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice ... if it were only that easy. Thanks |