Awe! Sweet poem! ;)

Who's his lover? I really want to know. Yami? Jou?

sweet and meaninglful but who is it from?

or is it a general poem for any seto maniac? LOL

Pretty good! :D

nice ending and question? is Yami his lover?

This is giving me a strange urge to go "Dude"... like the turtles from 'Finding Nemo', if you've ever seen that. It's really good. Good poetry is difficult to pull off, and it's even harder to get me to like the poems you find on this site (lots of them are okay, but amature), but I'd say you've done both here.

Rock on

DSF

only one question:WHO THE HELL IS HIS LOVER?

Nice poem. I liked the contrast of warmth and heat (have a poem like that meself about the Seto XD) But anyway... thanks so much for reviewing A Rose A Thorn. Hm, well I haven't updated on that in a while but I feel a reason to because you were really nice in your review. I'm glad you don't think Ari's the average Mary Sue; she wasn't supposed to be. I hate writing Mary Sue's but sometimes can't help it XP Anyway, great poem and I hope you continue to read my fanfic when I update which, now, will probably be soon _
Ishuzu

I wish i could write a peom like you. This is really good! Anywhoo, I hope you have good sucess with this! SRY KANT SPEL