no it cant be over make more make more!!

Wow I loved this story, anyway. Although I skipped a few chapters... OK, I admit it about ten chapters. But it was still exciting even without the ten chapters I jumped about!
Please write more of this kind of stories. But in your next story, it would be better if you just said Sirius and Hermione went for a date, kissed, got married and the end. But seriously, no offence!
:D :D :D :D See you next time.

Thank you for writing an excellent story! Very commendable! I'm glad you finished it; many people start stories and never finish them! I love this story!

Great chapter! Just out of curiosity though has anyone else noticed that you just so happened to give Hermione the last name Snicket as in: 'Lemony Snicket' the author? Well the story looks like it'll be a good one!

sorry, i have an accuont under the same name but i think ive already reviuewd this chapter, this story was amazing! i've re-read the last chapter like 8 times, i can get ur reasoning for not pairing them together but it still makes me sad (as i am a avid Hermione/sirius shipper) this story made me cry and it was beautifully written and thought-out. Thank you for writting works that harry potter fans everwhere can, will and do absoulutely love (i.e. people like me)!

no! ): the ending's just cruel.
lol. enjoyed this story loads. very original. loved the marionette idea. and Procas T. Nator? brilliant! (:

I read this story while i was sick for 4 days, its Sunday now and (unfortunately) i have to go back to school tomorrow (ive gotten over my cough) this is HONESTLY (completely honest) the BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!1 (my nose hasn't grown) I have absoultely loved every minute of it (and though i have missed so much stuff by sitting in my bead and reading for 3 days, i would not change it for the world, and i kinda agree with your ending but i think also beacuse of age (but i also agree with ur reasoning) I LOVE THIS STORY! ur a really talented writer, plz write more! if i had read this story like 3-4 years ago when u were still writing it i probablyu would have reviewed every chapter (sorry I have an odd tendency to not review completed stories) and probably would have been a much happier person (lol) this is an amaing story, and (im not kidding in the least) you should become a writer, i will totally buy ALL your books, so plz plz plz plz if u ever rite a story plz send me and email or PM and i will totally answetr, U ROCK!
PLZ REPLY TO MY REVIWE!

Amazing story!! I was looking at other people's favorties and came upon your stroy. I am so very glad I did. I have enjoyed every 172,284 word you have written. This stroy was a labor of love which expaneded over twenty months which colminated into a beautiful piece of art!! I loved every aspect of this story. I am some what leary of time travel stories, but yours was truly wonderful. I want to thank you for sharing you immense talent of writing with us the readers. It has truly been quite a delight reading your amazing story and I look forward to anymore stories you will write. Good Luck with everything!! :D

i love your links with the hitchikers guide! i love those books... :)
great plot and story etc! keep writing!
i reckon this is the first story i have read on ff to make me laugh out loud

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this was a very nice story i really liked it! ^_^

I definitely enjoyed this story! Although I would have liked it if Sirius and Hermione were together at the end, this ending actually makes more sense, logically. How many 16-year-old boys fall so deeply in love with a girl they know for four months that they pine away for her for twenty years? Doesn't make much sense to me. Plus, it's a great excuse to not write a sequel--what would you write about, if they're not together? The closest thing you could do would be to write your Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny story taking place 6th year or later, and Sirius is just not-dead.

All in all, it's a great story, and I'm glad that I found it. Jolly good job! (lol)

great

That was an amazing fic!! Thank you for writing it. I know this story has been finished for a while now, but i finally just read it; and boy am i glad I got to.
I love that you brough Sirius back, and your style of writing is amazing!
but I was thinking. In Prisoner of Azkaban the movie, they had it set up so what Harry and Hermione did when they went back in time, also happened in the future, such as the hundred dementors attacking. they didn't die because Harry went back in time and did the patronus.
So, couldn't it kind have been like that?
What Harry and Hermione did in 76 would have been the same as 96 because they had already been back in time? (if that makes sense, I don't know how to explain it)
but I don't know if you continue to check these reviews.
but Great story! I enjoyed reading it :)

i really wish u would rite a seqel cuz this story is so good that i started reading it and couldnt stop

an awesome, completely individual read and otherwise just a brilliant story! Thank you!

Much Love
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