The ending was fitting... always having to remember, always being driven down. So true.

Even though it wasn't a terribly lengthy piece, it had a good flow, slow quality to it, that didn't make things seem rushed.

Whoa. I read this on the Perfection site, and it was awesome.
Though minus the summary, when I read it I was really surprised when it turned out to be a dream. Great write! :bows down: Totally original.
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Nice work!! Although I know little to nothing about the background of this...I find the story very interesting. I think that it is great. I know I have told you about those reviews that are so boring and this may be one...but, um. I just dont know what to say other than I liked it...lol!