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Reviews for: Darkness
RavenLady
2005-05-17 . chapter 1
Too beautiful for words. Not many people can write Melian so convincingly; her emotions really come through, and yet she's still, well, a Maia. Wow.
Evenstar Elanor
2004-05-02 . chapter 1
i love the vivid description. your writing is always so good. i like "and wrought the very airs to burnished gold with their voices" and "Long I walked, beneath the starlight, clean and clear and bright as the touch of snow on a meadow in morning. But a frost was upon me, although I knew it not." keep writing!
alena
2004-04-29 . chapter 1
*sniffles*
You always have such a wonderful way of writing Melian, both otherworldly and filled with strong emotions.
And the words flow beautifully, as always.
Lalwen
2004-04-29 . chapter 1
You know I love this. But I thought I'd say it again. ;)
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