how do you ~do~ that?! so short i can read it without blinking, but so deep, and emotional.

awesome

brief, but good. again, i love your vivid description

What you've written is beautiful, even if I don't know the characters. You make me want to finish Silmarilian, of which I have only managed to struggle through 2 chapters.

You write Melian exceedingly well. Truly - a "divine spirit" who knows fear...

Oh that is gorgeous. Striking. That "another sky", and the fragmented leaves.
I love the connection here--the connection of the same blood, even though separated by great distances.