Thank you. You have no idea how much it means to me that your writing has capitals on sentences and good grammar. I will love you forever! Thanks so much for just making my day.

*cries* this was an awesome story *sniffles* keep writing

...I'm- I'm crying. That was so amazingly intense that- that words just c-can't describe it...*sniff sniff* wow excuse me *runs away and crys in a corner* *comes back 10 minutes later, red eyed and sniffling* ...:wow:...

-Shannon

That was very well written. I'm sure it was hard to write, but you did a god job. Draco's angst was very gripping, but there was not much releif from the sadness in your story. It was sort of twisted the way you woke Hermione and had them start talking about marriage and then just had them die. Not very tactful I'm sorry. You didn't even care to explain how Hermione just dropped . It was a nice attempt at a trajedy fic, and your writing is great, but you need to work on your plot development.

Uh, was that supposed to be suicide? Breathing is an involuntary function of the human body, unless interfered with, but as soon as the state of unconsciousness is reached and the mind relinquishes control, breathing automatically resumes. "Blonde" refers to a female, "blond" a male. Hope that wasn't seen as a flame...

Awsome song choice! Itreally fit well with the storyline. So sad and happy. They both died but at least they'll be together in death right? O well great job I really liked it! -Xamphia

Wonderful start I can not wait for the next chapter
ps plez r/r my story twisted love