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Tigger-69
2005-07-18 . chapter 2
Very enjoyable start I look forward to the following chapters. It is nice to see that not only has ranma gotten on with his life but so has nodoka. She has a job she is a loving mother and Grandmother and appears more human than in other stories.

Please continue
Zul'jin
2004-07-05 . chapter 1
Rick: Commander, look out!
Lisa: AUGH!
Dolza grabs Lisa.
Ben: Hey, what do you think you're with her?
Dolza: remain in your place! Now, my feisty female, I want to know by what process you become micronians. Answer me at once! *squeezes Lisa*
Lisa: Augh!
Rick: Stop squeezing her! We're born into this world as micronians!
Dolza: WHAT DID YOU SAY?!
Exedore: Yes, but born from what is the question.
Rick: Well, from our mothers, what do you think?
Bretai: What is this thing, "mothers"?
Ben: That's the female parent.
Exedore: You don't mean you are actually born from these females?
Bretai: But how is this possible?
Ben: It's no big deal really. When a male and a female get together, it just happens.
Bretai: This event - - how do you express it?
Lisa: I'll be the one who demonstrates.
Dolza: Alright, make sure you do.
Lisa: *makes "suggestive" sounds* I want to get the reaction on the video camera!
Rick: Alright. Then why don't you do it with Ben?
Lisa looks at Ben. Ben looks at her with wide eyes and a big grin on his face.
Lisa: Because I'd rather do it with you, Rick.
Lisa: Are you ready?
Dolza: Yes.
Rick starts having sex with Lisa. The Zentraedi are horrified by what they see. Ben, on the hand, is jumping up and down with glee.
Dolza: Get them out of here! Get these micronians out of my sight at once!
Dolza is reading a magazine titled "Muscle Man."
Jason
2004-07-02 . chapter 2
great chapter, keep up the great work.
Silverscale
2004-07-02 . chapter 2
A wondeful chapter Verse12 keep it going!^_^
rickW22
2004-07-02 . chapter 2
It's a good storie keep it up . When are you going to add more chapter's
Bladewing
2004-07-01 . chapter 2
Both chapters are well written, I enjoyed reading them. Please write more when you get a chance.
Jerry Unipeg
2004-07-01 . chapter 2
I think it is GREAT chapter!
Captain Tsubasa
2004-04-30 . chapter 1
Britty Pinny, and I suppose you're quite the professional in the action of sucking, aren't you?
This piece of fanfiction is tolerable.
Light02
2004-04-29 . chapter 1
intresting story line...had a simular idea (Minus the Salior Senshi, haven't seen any of the orignal version to even form a basis for using them) although I was plaing to use the oringal names for one Character from Macross...Hikaru Ichijro (Rick Hunter to all you Macross Noobs) other than that it's an intresting ide
Britty Pinny
2004-04-29 . chapter 1
U sux compard too me!
Jerry Unipeg
2004-04-29 . chapter 1
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Need more chapters!
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