Sailor Moon and co. are gone? That's a twist I wasn't expecting. You have a really great story here. Keep up the good work!

wow! i think i've read this before you rewrote it. i love it even more. i like how you're more into realism then some anime drama. i do hope you update soon.

This story is awesome! I haven't read a good Sailor Moon fanfic in forever, and this is more than good,it's excellent! Keep up the great work.

Will it's easy to see that your writing style has matured and gotten better over the years. I enjoyed your story the first time I read it. But to be honest I'm liking it way better now, can't wait to see the rest of it and looking forward to seeing the different rout you might take it.

write more please. i like it so far!

it's awsome! it would be so awsome if you posted more!

it's so cool i'm also a sailor moon freak. you should see all the stories i have in my room! anyway keep updating!

Okay, I haven't read this story before, and from the summary, this is probably one of those wierd fics involving new, author-made senshi that usually suck. But, I've skimmed over the reveiws, and there don't seem to be any problems, so I'll give it the benefit of the doubt. Heck, I always give these things the benefit of the doubt. It's not like I can really say anything- in my spare time I like to work on a group of senshi I've been making myself that I'm never, ever going to actually use because I suck at writing chaptered stories, let alone chaptered Sailor Moon stories.

Putting the off-topic discussion aside and six feet under, this seems to be pretty good. A couple of tiny mistakes that seem to be just careless errors: 'Ginzuisho' (when it should be 'Ginzuishou', but that's really just nit-picking, which I excel at :p), 'naïveté' (which is really wierd, I think you meant just naivete, or maybe naivety, I checked the Fanfic dict., but of course it just have both, so I'm not actually sure, but meh, whatever), 'want' (which I think should be 'wand'), and etc etc etc.

It also has some originality, I think. I've never seen anyone try this sort of thing- y'know, the Selenity scene. Personally , I like it. Also, normally, I wouldn't like so must detail in a prologue, but here, the details add mood. I especially like the ending for some reason, where you said the wand slipped from her fingers and she never heard it drop. It just seemed so wonderfully...final. So far, I could definitely say I like it, and shall be watching for the further (edited) chapters.

P.S. On a side note, can you tell me if the actual Sailor Moon characters will show up? I'll still read if they don't, but I've always loved the Rei-Usagi interaction, as well as Minako's slapstick humor, so yeah. I don't see anything that shows that they'll be in here, except as a 'Sailor V'-type hero-worship thing, so...just a comfirmation. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter, in which I shall write a review just as long just to annoy the authors like I always do!

WAH! that was as beautiful as the Crimson Tears! But shouldn't Princess Celeste return to rule Staria?

Yay! *jumps up and down happily* There's going to be a sequel! *grins* This is such a good fiction, and I'm glad you're going to write the sequel and all. I think I said this the first time I reviewed, but it's nice t see some characters that aren't just re-makes of the original senshi. ^^; There are so many of those... I'll be back when the sequel comes up, ja ne! :)

Final episode?! WHAT!! Noo! You can't do that! *sniffle* Well, I still can't wait to read the next chappie! O, and writing it out by hand? Ouch. I used to do that, and I wasted a lot of my HW paper doing it... hehehe... Anyways, can't wait for th next chappie... Didn't I say that already? ... ^^;

WAH! I hope to see the next chappie soon! Cliffies are so mean! *sniffle* Lol, ja ne!

YAY! Linkin Park! Linkin Park! HAHA, YOU SNOW DANCER! Lol, okay, now that that sout of my system, good chapter! I liked it a lot, can't wait for the next one!

True, meaningless fluff is vital to any fic - expecially an original senshi one. ^_- It makes me want to go look at all MY old senshi fics.
In fact, I think I will.
Keep it up, this is fun!

WOOT! I'm so happy you kept this chapter! :D! It was pretty funny and cute. I my favorite line was from Sabrina with, "How much you wanna bet Rubite's punkass is behind it?"
Once I read that line, I just lost it. It was so funny. Also, I enjoyed how Dawn screamed for her win in pokemon.
Anyway, ba da ba da baa...I'm loving it. ;D
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