I read this (and other of your GSR, actually) story quite a while ago but decided to come back and review because, ever since I started publishing my own fics, I realized what a booster for the writer's morale every single review is.

I guess, I'm going to express my overall impression about your works, seeing that I would repeat myself if I left a comment for every story of yours I've read.

I've read only GSR so far, but I am totally STUNNED. In a good way, that is. And "good way" says nothing because I'm amazed, astonished... I'm a non-English speaker, so forgive my lack of appropriate words that would express my wonderment, my love of your stories. Even "amazed" seems somehow a gross underestimate.

I simply love the way you delve into the characters' minds, making every possible scenario believable: whether it's a troubled Sara or Gil; whether Gil is suicidal (something I would've never concluded from the TV series) or Sara - cold towards Gil etc. etc. etc. I'm amazed by the way you enrapture the reader with the plot even if "the plot" is only a character's musings.

Being a non-native English speaker/writer myself, I can tell you that your stories are rivalling even those of native speakers. Had you not put up your country in your profile, I had never known that English is not your first language.

And would you mind if I said it for the umpeenth time?- I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

Regards,

Ramelia

love it. great story.

Ok, If I am honest, I am not really a Grissom Sara shipper, I could care either less each way, but I loved this story. I found it believable, and completely in character. I loved the end how they came to their realizations by reliving their mistakes when they were younger. Great story for anyone, even non GRS's, but this story may make you change your mind.

i loved this story. It was so gud. I cried my eyes out more than once, i love it. very well written congrats x

Nicely, nicely done. Unusual and well-thought-out. I liked hearing things from the inside of Grissom's head, and you draw out some exquisite points.

Hey,
Just wanted to write and let you know that I really enjoyed this fic.
It was so in charcter, so moving and just so damn sweet to.
The subject matter was very appropriate given some of the spoilers I've read.
Thanks so much for writing it, I really enjoyed reading.

This is easily one of the deepest and most touching fics that i have ever read. You did an incredible job doing exactly what i have been trying to do in my writing and can't get right. kudos to one of the best writers on the site!

i adored this. loved it!
i totally didn't want it to end and...aw.
i don't tend to get mushy or dig the sappy stuff but you did something totally wonderful with this piece and it...rocked.
thanks for writing it.

Wow! I loved this story! Many congratulations on a fanfic well done. I can only hope the Season 4 Finale is within the same league as this fanfic. Great character piece, and I loved the bits about fairy tales. Job well done!
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This is a great story i cant wait for the next chapter. Easily one of my favourite fics. Great job.
Lyndz

I really liked it, it's nice to see some soulful fan fic for a change!