I absolutely love this story! Well done! Poor Snowball. I know what it feels like to be kicked out, but you really did it with this story. Nice analogy of the snowball, too. Thanks. I think you made my day with this story.

Interesting interpretation, but I think your point may have been better implied if you did not include the paragraph about why Snowball's name suits him and left it to symbolism. But I could also be...anal (which is more than likely).

^^ Kudos!

(I absolutely love Orwell.)

-paxbanana

I liked this! Brilliant!

I liked it. You have a cool writing style. You should continue this.

well, its interesting. If you are aiming for kids. I think you could be a good auther if you tried some of the other catagories. But you did a good job.

Hm... Interesting. Are you going to do more with this?