Very sveet story!
Keep it up, please, would you?
:-)

I think that you have a great beinning but his name is not Asran it's Athrun! *-*

The second story is my favorite - LOVE the ending. Definite leaves the reader with food for thought. *suppresses hyperness in order to conduct somewhat organzed review* Short but sweet. The stylke, description, plot flwo is excellent. I dunno if you're gonna continue, but in anycase, KEEP WRITING!

I enjoyed this greatly. I also think the relationships between the four main characters won't flow as smoothly as they all want you to think after the series, and I also really love angst. =]
Please continue.

Nice POVs, this seems like a great starting point if you did want to turn this into a chaptered affair, rather than one-shots. Both chapters are interesting enough on their own though. Hope to see more soon. ^_~

These were different from the usual happy, fluffy fics that I read but I believe this works. Therefore, I liked these little one-shots.

Yo! This si pretty good so far. I can't say very much, but, keep up the good work. Update soon!

Well, not much i can say around here... Keep up the good worK!

its a great fic so keep this coming cause its getting better (^_^)

I don't get it, it just is there, no sturcture. it was yucky

Is this a one-shot? Well, this is one of the few athrun x cagalli out here and you've tried a different approach that seems to have worked out. Wish you'd have made it longer...be reading more.

I like this fanfic a lot! Does it end here or no? Cuz i rlly wanna read more!! Plz update soon :)

i already read this when you posted it in the gundamsedd community at lj, so i guess i'll leave my official review here.
i can definitely see this happening after the series; so much unresolved conflict can only grow again in the future.
anyways, keep up the good work. ^_^

Interesting, very interesting, I like to see where this is going. Please update soon!