I have always sympathized with Ophelia; you give me more reason to do so. Beautifully written. An excellent work.

Aww that was lovely.

Don't take THIS as a flame but I read your flame to Sephy or AC2 on fictionpress.net and I thought it was kind of harsh...

hey, your poem thing whatever it is, it's ok, but I personally like rebbecaWave's story better, I personally think you need to work on your attitude, sure she's not the best but neither are you. The best thing to do is encourage someone with their writting, yes she did say to lay it on her but she probably didn't mean it like that, so suck it up, and work on your own problems before telling someone else what they should be doing

Very nice, short and to the point. I like the voice, it sounds very much like Ophelia; she would certainly conclude that Hamlet's behavior is her fault. If you write any more Shakespeare fics I'd definitely be interested in reading them. Nice job.

Very well written. Excellent insight into reading beyond the text at what the character Ophelia truly feels. A wonderful work of art that empathizes and brings the story to life with further insight into the characters mind and personality.

Er...wow...that is kindof dark. But very good! Smashing job, descrbing everything. Very deep, very deep.

O Interesting-- explains a lot of what happened to her. I like all the physical description of her and Hamlet's eyes. Keep up the good work!