Very don't stop now keep the story going.

I loved your outlook on things and how perfectly it could fit in to the real story

Absolutely incredible. I am so glad that you are still writing DA--at least I hope you are, I haven't seen anything since May. You have such a wonderful gift.

great story...but where is the SEQUEL?

hey...whyd'ya stop...

...its an amazing story, keep it up...

Omigod...
Just what the doctor ordered for us da starved folks in the goonies
Thanks for makin my Friday and please keep us in your hearts and thoughts as we salivate for more of your mental

Excellent! That time frame of the DA universe is one of my favourites to read about and think about. This saucy little number was well placed and a lot of fun.
Glad you are still writing ML for those who so desperately enjoy and need it.

Good first chapter. Another star24 miracle in the making? I look forward to the next one
Also, is your alternate season 2 done? I hope not I'm addicted to those stories

Whoo...Rising revisited. Another brilliant work by Star24! ^_^

Amazing work, but pleasse don't end it lke this and write a sequel or continuethe story!!
thx

Hey,
Amazing story. Thanks for posting.

Hey,
I like it muy much! But then, there isn't much that you write that I don't like...:-)

this was really awesome and i liked it a lot, i think you should keep going with this i liked how you changed what happened in the show and made it better. keep up the amazing work because i realy love it!

that was great! for all we know, it could have really happened...
can't wait for your next story, you're an excellent writer Star24!

Finis? What?? No more?