 Leminicka 2005-11-10 . chapter 5AWW that is so sweet and all to good to be true! |
 Mari Grem 2005-07-02 . chapter 5Aw...that's so sweet. And I love Blaise and Tracey, great charcaters.
-Nicole- |
 druccillamalfoyrox 2005-06-28 . chapter 5Wow, awesome story! thats wicked, it's soo going on my favorites list...but it can't be over? your ending it! -tear tear- *wips them away* lol..but serious...thats sad, but it's still good...very spectacular! stupendous! wonderous! amazing! good job!
~Druccilla~ |
 iluvmyharrypotter 2005-06-04 . chapter 5aw so cute! |
 caillion 2005-06-04 . chapter 5aw. sweet. godd story. |
 kranbaree 2005-06-04 . chapter 3how very interesting! |
 Dreamer of Fantasy 2005-06-04 . chapter 5That was so cute! A bit shorter than I was hoping, but I really liked it. Took over a year for you to finish it, but it's all good :P
*is still all "aw" at Draco and Gin*
So cute!
Wonderful story. Keep it up.
Rock on ;) |
 arrrgghimapiratenow 2005-04-30 . chapter 3I like this alot its very interesting please update soon ^_^ |
 Parody-of-an-Angel 2004-06-18 . chapter 1WOW! really gives a good insight into Slytherins. love how you started off with a minor character as opposed to someone like Draco! update soon |
 Catmint 2004-04-30 . chapter 1This is pretty good so far, although there are a number of spelling and punctuation errors that need to be looked over.
- quite often, you use a full stop instead of a comma in speech, when someone stops talking
- minor typo where you missed out the 'p' in 'replacement'
- 'a lot' is 2 words, not one
- no 'u' in 'forty'
- 'sarcastically', not 'sarcasticly' |
 Dreamer of Fantasy 2004-04-29 . chapter 1really good so far, i like how your character isn't the perfect slytherin but she's still cool(like me =D lol). update soon! i'm inteested to see what else will happen |