ok i love outlaw star ( and suzuka is the best not gene but gene is alright) and this sound like it might be a good story 8D

i loved to story and if you want a name i have one called Tear. yes sounds sad bbut i like her. if you want to use her all i ask is you say that the name came from Janine and/or merc. great jib keep writing

You sadistic bitch how can you be so cruel id threaten to hunt you down *evil glare* but i reserve that kind of anger for when people r mean to aisha so i am dispacting the litle blue monkeys (dont go near your toilet) then we shall see who laughs evil no not me the monkey king he needs a new slave hell teach u what mean is.

You, you! GODDAMNIT I HATE STUFF LIKE THIS! sequal better be good or I am gonna git extremely pissed and such! other than the overcharecterzation on jim (muscles? im not sure...) good fic

Woah! OMG! That's all I can say excwpt you described it really good! *faints*

Oh my gosh I almost forgot to leave a review now that wasn't very polite of me well anyways POR JIM

ok now that that's done syonara...

That was great i love melfina she's my favorite character in outlawstar and i think gene is so hot WRITEMORE please.

Very cute story. It sort of moved a little fast though. What I would reccomend in future stories is to give yourself time to build the relationships. Give the readers some more bonding experiences between the characters. Give the characters more reason to be in love with each other than that he or she is hot or mysteriouse.

aw that's it, i can't wait for chapter 5!

aww... GREAT! more pweeze

beautiful! I'm off to read the sequel!

Verry good. I loved every bit of it...keep writing.

OK,u have to update the sequal, I am SO waiting!

That was so saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaddd! Gene and Melfina 2gether4ever!(sobs) That was just so sad!1

good story..keep going