I really like your view on Harry and Malfoy's relationship. This story is showing a different side of them both and I just love it. It is beautifully written. Well done.

Wonderfully written :)

Pouts* I loves it but I wish there was more...Then again has spoiled me. So please forgive the sliver spoon in my mouth. I guess I have learned to talk around it. :D

This fic was very different from any that I've ever read before. In a good way of course. You showed Harry as vulnerable and you showed a side of him many people wouldn't see. I loved it!

wow. I love the beautiful description of the light and shadows, and imagery, and realistic interaction between harry and draco. good job!

This was one of the most realistic suicide one-shots I've ever read. Really good.

woah... that was really good. I liked the way Draco hadn't thought of Harry as a person either, but for different reasons...

Your assertion that the muses would abandon me worked.

Heh.

I really did like your story - it starts off a bit dramatic, but you could've gone quite overboard with Draco's reaction to Harry's actions, and you didn't. Nice. :)

-K

I like it. Dark, sort of humorous in some twisted way. What if the knife hit somebody though? Well, keep writing. You're really good.

Very good.. Very Very good

Great job.

its beautiful.

Hi,
Very interesting. I've never read anything quite like it. But I'm coming to expect that from you. You seem to be nothing if not original. Very well done as always.
Thanks.

that was an unexpected plot
i kinda half expected slash when i read the first couple of paragraphs

i liked this one-shot though

opens up a whole new world of possibilities

love your writting

i really do

Miau... this was nice and suicidal ;) very nicely written and it has a great flow.