Whoa that was really weird, but it was really good anyway. I'm speechless, that was excellent, yet very angsty and frightening.

Wow. o_O This is a really powerful sotry, although I'm kinda confused to who is who. I mean, how come Artemis keeps seeing the penguin and the fat lady everywhere? Did she deliberately lure or something? And the police officer was part of the kidnapping, right? What a corrupt *bleepbleepbleep*. And I don't understand the ending, what happened to Artemis? He couldn't possibly be kidnapped or killed, cause you said this was an explanation to why he was speechless, meaning he was alive. Sorry for all the questions, it's just that I'm not really good at looking at fics from different perspectives. Aside from the fact that I'm blur. >

this is great!very exciting.but I guess you're not gonna update this, ever..? shame,this one has potential.

OMG! update update update update!

Wow! That fic was incredible. I loved the way that Artemis withdrew into himself to double those numbers to block out what was happening outside. The way it built up to the final conclustion was amazing and heart stopping. Artemis thinking about what direction he was headed was also a good touch.

Amazing fic.

Wow. I'm not sure how to review this. All I can really say is that it was chilling, with the illogicity that runs through a child's brain, coupled with Artemis' intellect, even at five. The recurring penguin just gave the chills, and at the part where the girl's pigtails fell off, I had to stop myself from crying out. I felt sick, and believe me that's a good thing that you got such a big reaction from me.
--UnSerious Sirius

Nice, I like that he is illogical like a little kid, but still smart, and can do all thoes doublings in his head. Its a good story, even if butler would never really loose track of a five year old. Good story...

I hope you kill those guys I hate hate penguins por artemis! While butler find him?Update son

0_0... Poor Artemis! He's a very bright lil kid isn't he! That poor girl!... I don't like penguin's anymore... I hope those guys get killed! YES! KILL THEM! You NEED to update! NEED TO!

What happened in the end? As you can tell, I'm a bit slow at the moment. @.@ But it was great, a little creepy... And I'm afraid of penguins now.

wow...that was great..are you gonna make another chappie?

continue this pleez it is soso awesome!or else !

You have excellent writting skills! That penguin really freaked me out, by the way! Interesting plot. Poor little Arty! Oh, and I'd like you to know that I'll scream every time I see a penguin. J.K.! Good Job.

THAT was really, realy good! I really liked the way you portrayed Artemis... It was excellent.

o_O Whoa...sheer brilliance. I applaud you in a fanatic manner for this wonderful and scarring masterpiece that you have created. You should do more...tis excellent.