I don't think it's lame. You write well.

Mattaku, another fic I have to comment. Well, I do this on one day so no protest. Hm, the idea is quite good, but the development of the idea isn't as good as the idea is.

I can bet that it's getting out of control, and probably it's different from the way it used to be. I experience that often.

Nice fic, although I don't like Golden Pair that much.

ya...all ur fic drew a smile 'cross my face. it's nice. this one not that interesting but the english is excellencio!echilente...congratulation. ur stucture has improved 10%.gud work!
keep writting...
I've got some addition to say 'bout 'the trip to romance.'YUP!I agree with Mon-chan. what the hell was going on in their own room!?
...Vina...
getting echier-echier n naughtier-naughtier huh?...hahaha...=DD

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hiyaa! your writing is getting better and better!! ^^
d plot is also kawaii~!!XD
keep up d good work!!
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Wow! What a great fic! The basic story is great! I really like it. But I am very disgusting with the KISS EVENT. Maybe this because I dont really like yaoi... BUt Really your skill increases from day to day! I like it! Be success all the time!! I am waiting for your next Tenpuri fic!! Heehee
P.S: Teach me how to make fic please!

hehehe. as usual, u're still unable to portray fuji very well. n, yeah, grammatical errors. sorry 4 not beta-ing it. one more thing, u gotta slow down the pace. ^^;; but it's not lame, y'know. it's good, but u can do better. ganbatte! ^^