I liked this story...I would like to read more if possible.

*kawaii shimmer-eyes*

"Please, miss, I'd like some more!"

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Seriously, Larania, your stories rock, and I'd like to see some more from this story, and Bloodlines, and Momma's Girl, and the Animorphs story, and... Well, let's just say there are quite a few I'd like to see you continue.

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- Rosy the Cat

Oh please, please continue this soon. This is such an original combination. I loved it.

WHOO HOOO! I LOVE HIS FICCIE! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

its great!

its great

More! More! More! More! More!

I'm glad you fixed the first chapter... Whoa, loved this new chapter, but getting into FFnet these last days can drive you crazy with all the server upgrading and others messes. I'm loving this story, and this is getting very interesting... What kind of telephatic abilities does Trunks possess? Will he have to use his Saiyajin abilities and perhaps get caught at it by someone (hopefully not a bad guy)? Will someone realize the extent of Trunks' powers? If his secrets are expoxed... How is he going to get out of the situation? I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters... GREAT FIC, LARANIA!

Good chapter. Can't wait for the next.

sequel?

Finish this pretty, pretty, pretty please, with whatever kind of ice cream you like on top!

(should be signed review) I LOVE IT! YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING IT! I LOVE TRUNKS!

When're you going to finish it? It's cool.

UH... Larania? I hate to have to point this out but... why in the world did you post the second chapter twice (once in place of the first chapter) when chaptering the story and left out the first chapter? I love this story, and I'd hate it if you got in trouble for leaving out chapters as separate stories (the new rules say that you can get kicked out for that if you don't group all the chapters of a serialized story soon. Could you put the first chapter together with all the others, pretty please? I'd love to see how this story continues without having to go in search of a previous chapter if I want to reread it from the start. Thanks for listening, and sorry to sound like I'm whining. I just want to get to read the whole story without much hassle.

FINISH PLEASSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE!