A great story. Very good.

WOW! I have some stories i've worked out in my head I only wish I could write as well as what I just read...
I could hear alec guiness speaking those words.

I think you've managed to tune in to your chosen character well, you've really managed to write down the emotion with in him which is what I like about your writing, you seem to be able to tune in to your cosen characters feelings very easily, which is quite difficult to do sometime's, keep on going and keep on writing!

This was a very well written little peice...as I learn more about Obi Wan's character the more I am so heart broken. When I first watched the original trilogy I always liked old Ben, but I never put any thought into his character, and stories like this just show all that he goes through and it is a true test to his character. I wonder if George realized this or not when he wrote old Ben...anyways, I digress, great story, I really enjoyed it.

Well done, a great story and a wonderful subject.

This is great! I love how you've captured Obi-Wan's pain, but also his...what must have been such a feeling of confusion and turmoil as he struggles with his self-guilt and the status of things...I don't know if I'm explaining very well but I think you've done a terrific job of capturing his emotions..Nicely done!