Something happened to my other eail here's the new one spread the word

This isn't a bad fic though it does seem rushed in the earlier chapters but nevertheless, not bad at all when are we going to see an update?

Very well written update. So far, you've gotten the characters and the situations for this story well done. I agree as well on Campbell's judgements while reading this chapter, he surely was wrong to judge his own recruits for the things they've done which was sensible to the situation.

All in all, I do hope to see how Micheal ends up meeting Mana and the plot ahead. I'll be looking for the next update soon.

Nice presentation of subchapters feauturing the recruits of FOXHOUND in this story, you got all their personalities hands down, and I'm certainly curious for what Drake has planned in the future. Let me know if you still need help editing this story and I'll be happy to help in anyway.

Quite well done. :) An enjoyable read, though rather brief during the earlier chapters. I have nothing to complain about for this fic.

Not too shabby. You seem to capture the overall essence of a Metal gear sotry than alot of people. I can see why Shardclaw thinks highly of you. I will be sure to put Venom in my next MGS fic, one of the stories is a sequel to Scorpin's tale, the other is a new OC who Shardclaw can tell you about.

interesting. have you ever thought about doing an evangelion/guyver crossover? (sho x rei, perhaps?)

Very nicely done in terms of story developement. Can't wait for the next chapter.

All I can say about this chapter is that it was well done in terms of the potrayal of the characters invovled and the actions that took place, I really enjoyed the update. Just remember if you need help in the future, just ask me, okay? I'm always glad to help out in anyway I can.

So far so good for this chapter. It's a pleasure helping with the story. Keep it up.

Hey, this is an intresting update. I was suprised Riku made his appearance, but that's no scene, it was rather cool, as well the appearance of the Ikari team. You've potrayed them quite well. Hope to see more of this, and if you need any editing help from me, just ask away. See you around.

Glad to see this chapter turned out good. It's definitely been an honor to edit your story and thanks for having Riku show up. I look forward to the next chapter and I'll be glad to edit again. Please update soon.

Hey man, great update. Nicely done with Team Ikari and Riku. You even got in a bit of action in this chapter.

Good stuff.

Keep up the good work.

Glad to see that this chapter turned out good. I can't wait to see how Michael survives and what happens next. Please update soon.

Excellent. The past of Michael "Venom" Hansen is further played out. I look forward to the next chapter (get it out quick!)