You! It's you! No, wait, don't run away! Actually, I saw this on Sariyuki's site, and I still really like it. It has that nice disjointed feel to it that I kind of associate with Saiyuki scenes. Except, it took me a while to figure out what was going on. And the phrase "'die-or-hand-over-the-sutra-and-die' freelancers" is just funny, for some reason. Nice!

Omg... are you kidding me with "so I'd appreciate reviews telling exactly how bad it was."? I've been thinking about this fic all day long, dontcherknow. Love it.
Totally, I love it. And my fave line is "If I promise to hold you, will you let go of my shirt?"
It's just so good! Cheers

ah, me likey! yay 38!

and u say im good, huh? _
wow...this fic is awesome. and finally something more than a drabble from you. i dunnoe what else to say... 'cept this is delicious. i like it lots...
which reminds me... i've got to work on my 'Incident' fic...
good job, ne! _

Well, if you've really got a yen to be criticized, I could ask if you meant 'is *the* coffee ready' and 'I'll take you at *your* word,' and maybe something like 'the times I fill in for you.' Other than that, though, I think you're out of luck.
I really like how Sanzo didn't expect kissing Hakkai to work for him. He's remarkably oblivious like that-it was kind of obvious to many of us from approximately episode two. _; It was also typical of him to express his dissatisfaction to Gojyo in the way he did, but I can't say I like that much. Sanzo at his insensitive worst. (sigh) Although I suppose Hakkai was asking for fireworks with that 'amused' comment. Things like this always make me wonder how much on purpose the things he does are...

Aaw Hakkai and Sanzo rule! Don't know what else to say...except YAY for 38 and 83! _;