an ok story.don't worry about the spelling!

nice job!

I-i-i-i-im s-s-s-s-so s-s-s-sor-sorry!
I -o-only r-read f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-fo-fo-fo-fo-fo-fo-fou-fou-fou-four l-l-l-l-l-l-l-lines...
No! not pokemon!
Te he! Soz

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Arti...

Wow! I love this story! Articuno Island is the best website might I add. Well, anyway... I read this story possibly a million times.. and it seems to get better each time! Keep up the great work!

Dani-Chan FLARE IS THE MIGHTY FIRE GODDESS!

I'm reviewing this again, necause the fic didn't show up on my favorits list before. Okay

Cool as Ice, like Articuno!

Very good. But you spelled charizard wrong

This is SOOOOOOOOOOOOo on my favorites. i LOVED IT! hee hee.

this is a really good story. Anyone who may be reading this review, you should definitely read the story. It's really good.

In my opinion, the story is better because there are new pokemon and more of the rare ones. It seems that too many writers limit their stories to the premade universe, but Arti Cuno has done a fantastic job of adding new elements to the plot. I especially like the pokemon\human mix stuff. That's so cool!

OK. I was saving my big review for this part, and giving small reviews to the others._. I have to say this is one of the best Pokemon fics I have ever saw. You are truly a master of the pen... And judging by the drawing for your author pic, if you drew that, a master of the drawing pen too._. You have had great success with making the mysteries of this story the kind that keeps you guessing till the end when you find out the answer. Your main character isn't the most typical - not just her body, but her personality too. Not most main character heroines are not nice all the time._. But even when she's a little mean she's lovable. Please keep writing - your stories are a joy to read.

Good part.

*giggles* Coolest part ever.

GREAT! Arti's my fave character!_

O_O What happened to Arti?

Like I've said before, each time I read a new part, it's so good it's hard to say exactly how good it is._.