  Thunderstone 7/21/00 . chapter 1 THAT was better. |
| Thunderstone 7/21/00 . chapter 1 One problem, There's only one Articuno, one Moltres, and one Zapdos. AND you can't be a master with only them. |
 Mandy1 7/4/00 . chapter 1:) :) (slaps herself) |
| Mandy1 7/4/00 . chapter 1 :) Sorry :) Sorry :) Sorry :) Sorry, in case you haven't :) already noticed this kinda :) stuff always :) makes me :) smile :) Sorry, did I say smile :) I meant :) beam.:) |
| Sabrinathe Psychic GymleaderArticunogalAlana Black 6/17/00 . chapter 1 Arti, you are a really great writer and I love your site! (the reason that i havent emailed you is because im not allowwed) my fav pokemon is articuno and guess what?1 i swear i hadnt read your storys yet. because i didnt have a computer,i made up a character that was half Aritcuno and half pokemon! cool ey? |
| Jolteon 5/30/00 . chapter 1 ALL RIGHT! BUTTERFREE'S BACK! **Does the chicken dance** |
| Someone 4/25/00 . chapter 1 Um, Charmander didn't evolve yet. It wasn't even Charmeleon yet. It evolved into Charizard after Ash got the Boulder, Cascade, Thunder, Rainbow, Marsh, and Soul badge. |
| Gryphon 4/11/00 . chapter 1 About time! |
| Mimi 4/11/00 . chapter 1 I don't think I like Arti, but the story is still good. |
| Gryphon 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Next! |
| Teardrop005 4/11/00 . chapter 1 I've read all four parts and they are well written. I like em and I need to know what happens next. So please write more. ;-) |
| kill the queers 4/11/00 . chapter 1 arti is a bittsh. nuthin but a hore to gary's stupidass. this is what she said in pikachuese: "pikachu, i wanna give you a blow job" hah! this is dumb! |
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