Wonderful story! I liked it a hell lot! You brought a different perspective to the two, and I very much appreciated that.

Seeing Bakura so broken really made me want to piece him together and let him live.
And knowing Ryou was so alone and confused, I just wanted to give him Bakura back...

So sad... Loved it through and through!

O__O awesome
recently, an invatation's been sent to you to joining the C2 Community, I'm running it.
HOWEVER, you have no email to speak of (posted - no email address of yours has been posted)
So, I can't send you a personal invitation in advance.
PLEASE join! it's "Darn Straight Ryou" a collection of stories dedicated to non yaoi Ryou.
Contact me if you can, thanks!

I liked this story, the words mostly, it showes the emotion deeper then what most other stories i've read have.
it's not about crying, its about the manner in which it is brought, and i do think you brought it well...

goodbyes are irrelevant... the way you typed ryou and his feelings... yami bakura... everything... it reminds of me... of who i truly am... and al that i have...

Bakura does have a odd seeking for pain, but in a way, I think he knows what he's doing...

Nya, I almost cryed..

Wow. I have nothing else to say but Wow! I love the analogies. It seems so deep, and to be that deep in such a short story only results in me saying Wow. Because i have been left in awe of your great writting skills. ^-^

*Sighs, sniffing* It's going to suck to see the yamis go away...Man I can't wait till it happens!
Yami: *Stare and twitch*
A: -- Um...M-chan, reveiw
Me: Oh, right. *Smile* That was a nice piece, very well written too. Poor Ryou...X3 Loved it, I really did.

That was deep, nice job!
~TK

omg...
that was soo sad...
*sniff*
but so good...
~Lyn~

Interesting bits of philosophy. I enjoyed this. Keep writing. Ja ne.