 Star Geazer 2006-02-25 . chapter 4 Okay how long am I going to wait? I read your wonderfull story a month ago and the fifth chapter is not on yet! Please don't stop writing now! PLEASE!
Oh by the way you are a REALLY good writer. Bye.^_^ |
 moon and star decendent 2006-02-20 . chapter 4 Please hurry up and put the next chapter on, your story is so cute!I really can't wait, you are a good writer, REALLY good. bye. |
 Nelida I. Valles 2006-02-17 . chapter 1 Your story is really beautiful. I just wish you could finish it so I could tell others about it. I might even print it and give a copy to my closest friends. You did a VERY good job, I just want to know what happened with Sakura and Sayoran. If you read this please finish your story. PLEASE! |
 shyblossom 2006-02-09 . chapter 1i love it |
 vicky 2005-02-27 . chapter 4 I think its great (thanks for the dicctionary at the end i didn't know what some of the words meant!) I can't wait for the next one! please write the next one quickly! |
 melaniemelmelgirl 2004-08-11 . chapter 1This is a good story! Thank you for reviewing my story earlier, I appriciate it! |
 heheangel kisses 2004-08-10 . chapter 4lol, kero is so nice! hm... who could that shadow be... anyway UDPATE SOON! |
 clowprincess 2004-07-28 . chapter 3 This was excellently written. This whole story was Tsubasa-esque without being a knockoff. The way it is writeen leaves much to the imagination without leaving too much out. The critisism is too much Japanese. Not everybody can speak it. I would recommend a glossary |
 damson rhee 2004-07-18 . chapter 3Short but sweet! Good stuff damson! |
 heheangel kisses 2004-07-12 . chapter 3oh, very good fanfic! hehe, it's deep... but what is syaoran blaming himself for? can't wait for next chapter! update soon! |
 BIG DADDY 2004-07-04 . chapter 3 I think you have an incredable use of the english language. I will have to read the whole story over at one time so I can follow it better. I have a hard time with the names but thats just me . Keep the creative juices flowing. I think your doing great. |
 berden 2004-07-01 . chapter 2 I thoroughly enjoyed this part of your story. It holds a readers' interest and is being well set up. I like your choice of word arangements. I don't understand some of the words of course because of the language difference, but am still well able to follow the story and what the Japanese words mean by the context of the sentence. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the next installment. |
 mooshum 2004-05-27 . chapter 1 Your story left me interested to read more! You have a great command of language. My only critisism would be at times it is too wordy. Well done for your 1'st story, keep at it! |
 Hellmaster Fibby 2004-05-21 . chapter 2I like your use of language. =) The story line is good, though it's been used a couple of times before (although not all of them is as well developed as yours.) the only thing i noticed is that you have a couple of typos, and that the dialogue isn't very consistent with the writing style. (its kinda hard to explain...)
oh, i also noticed that you like the word "baka." hee hee. ;D
i guess that's it... keep writing! your fic has potential!
p.s. your name sounds so familiar to me, but i can't quite figure out why. hmm.. oh well. ^^; |
 Paris Marriott 2004-05-17 . chapter 2again, another good chapter-normally i would write a longer more in depth review, but i am tired and need to pull another all nighter to finish papers for finals-keep going this is good |