Somehow, and I can't pinpoint how, this is different from things I've read of Sess and Rin before. Maybe... because in this, she sees how precariously she stands, while in all other stories, she takes it for granted. Hmm... It is, good. :) Like I'm an expert...

You write beautifully - each word, each phrase, each sentence describe what it's supposed to describe perfectly. I'm deeply touched as I watch the scene unfold. *unable to move from nearby tree, getting soaked to the skin with no sheltering pelt in sight*
*sniff*

That was beautiful and powerful! I loved every word of it.

very nice. you did a great job getting into sessy mine. great.

Wonderful! Are you going to add a point of view from Sessy?

^__^ Cute. If she were a bit older, it could be construed as romantic WAFF, but... well, there's two fics that have her at thirteen, and they're already a pairing. Ah well. Liked it anyway, and even though this is a dreadful perversion of your original intentions, I'm going to assign a romantic connotation to Fluffy's gesture. ^.^ Gomen, even tho' it's not supposed to be Sess/Rin(or is it? duh duh duh...), I still like it. Write on! Ha ha! get it? Ha ha! Ha... Yeah, shutting up now. -.-

i love you xD! this is a fabulous story...you must write more great pieces like this. heehee...

KAWAII this was cute story.

awesome story!

aww, how sweet. gotta love it!

Wow, that was beautiful.

omg i love this fanfic. You made Sesshomaru like his character when he'd probaly start talking to someone about his feelings.

I love the analogy you drew between the storm and Sess. He seemed to thrive in the elemental fierceness. Yet, despite the storm brewing around them, Sess becomes contemplative and revealed his inner thoughts almost without his realizing it. How you portray such a complex character as Sess in terms that we can grasp is truly amazing...Please continue. Would love to see what happens next ...

dude thats deep naw just joking it was realy cool your a good writer but that was deep not saying thats bad peace

Love the details man and the writing structure. Makes it a worthwhile read, and you kept the characters in character. >.>; you know, not like ooc-ish. Those type of stories annoy me. Please continue to write more.