VERY interesting, I have to say. Good job so far, with everything. I like your idea for the story, its really original. Awesome, awesome,awesome. I hope you update soon! So long for now!
Intriguing! Lots of things in there which I think will be significant later on. I've never read any Matrix fic before but I'm really enjoying this. I hope you're continuing to work on it...
Wow. That's pretty cool. I never thought that the Agents might have been based on "real" people, but that's definitely an interesting take on the war. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Adhara1 2004-05-04 . chapter 1
Nicely written, a good read in all. Please update soon.