I read your other reviews and would like to say 'ditto' on all points, but I especially like how you manage to humorously criticize without sounding like an arrogant nerdy fanboy. (You know the type right?)
Using squall for this was a brilliant idea and you definitely had his voice nailed.

Well I'm off to read your other stuff now. Good job :)

I've read and reread and rereread this, and it still manages to crack me up, every time. Pure genius. Period. *A*

Okay, maybe not period. Squall was in character, his points made sense, and #5. Oh God. xD

BRAVO!

It's 3:56 in the morning and I'm practically having seizures of laughter.:)

Everything Squall pointed out was dead on, especially the Card thing.

"Escaping from prison? Stay a while and let’s go a few rounds. Oh no, the Garden is under attack. Let’s play CARDS! Ultimecia is about to destroy the world, but wait up, you haven’t acquired Leviathan, yet!"- ROTFLMAO.

God help us all.:)

THIS IS GENIOUS!

Well... *chuckles* hehe... I'm putting this to favourites. ^_^

Hilarous! I can so imagine Squall getting mad and sitting and writing this! Very original idea! x

Look look look, Seifer and Squall are going to engage in the final battle to decide who is the bad boy and who is the wannabe! Wait, what the heck? Gilgamesh?! WHAT?! That's lame! And here I was, thinking I'd get to be spectator to the duel of the century and Gilgamesh just has to come and ruin it all.

xD Loved it. I would write an angry letter with a list too if Square messed with my image and made me a warped hero in a non-sensical fantasy game.

I know it's late, but I just found this fanfic and had to review. :P Keep up the good work!

LOL this is just so damn hilarious!! It simply kept me laughin thruout, esp since I can actually picture Squall writing this!! Good job ;)

This is so hilarious! I totally agree about the cards, that's the dumbest thing they could have thought of. If I had to save the world within a certain amount of time I don't think I'd be playing cards. And Cid is kind of a fat idiot isn't he? And I guess it would make more since to make Squall ugly, but I love the way he looks, so I don't care. As long as I enjoy looking at him! Thanks for the funny story, I laughed so hard I cried! Great job!

[Problem #5: Transportation
Five words on this subject.
Me on a chocobo. No]

hahahaha...funny as hell.

This was priceless!

HI! wow that was really funny! no lie! I mean to me personally I love Squall more then anyone in the world but hey! you didn't be mean to Rinoa so I'ma happy!

god this thing had me laughting my ass off roling on the floor my mother actualy thought i had a seizure because i was loughing so hard by the way i read it before but i couldnt review because i had to calm my mother down and you actualy got me thinking about the many faults the game had but the funniest part is that its actualy sounds like squall that wrote that letter roflmao god im still loughing lol

This.Is.Brilliant.

By far the best FF8 fic I've seen. It's all so true and you raise so many valid points about the game that make me look upon it in disfavour.

Great letter. Awesome fic. Great now I look as idiotic as Laguna...I'd better shut up.

C-can't...BREATHE!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

omg, that was so true. all that stuff from ff8 - loved it!! great job, great idea. =) LMAO!!