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| Frannie18 2005-05-15 ch 5,  | abuseFABULOUS! I love the remarks thrown back and forth be tween Niles and C.C. |
| NoRRIngtonsGalIWish 2004-11-23 ch 5, | abuseThis story is coming along well but I want to read some Fran/Max moments! Give us something please =) |
| Laura Cox 2004-10-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat Story, I love thw whole thing but i'm just responding during this cahpter...keep it up...I love it! |
| Koyasu 2004-07-09 ch 3, | abuseGood. I'm FINALLY able to review! Anyhoo, like I told you on AIM, great job! The words you wrote actually sounded like they could be from an episode. I could clearly picture the characters saying and doing those things. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Allison Lindsay 2004-05-19 ch 3, | abuseVery nice work, Kristen. Another great chapter. Poor Fran - whatever did she do to deserve the torment imposed upon her by Caca? Lol. Looking forward to more. :o) |
| BeHiNdThEsHaDoWs45 2004-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abusegood story...very nanny-like I really like the red dress thing! Keep up the good work! |
| Taylor 2004-05-14 ch 2, anon. | abuse-I enjoyed reading the chapters so far. I like the way you build up the story so that you can leave cliff-hangers. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. I'm anxious to see if Fran's dress can rekindle that flame they had that night. |
| Allison Lindsay 2004-05-13 ch 2, | abuseBrava! You're a very good writer, Kristen. I am really enjoying your story. Keep up the good work and maybe I'll hook you up with Max. Hehe. :-P |
| Allison Lindsay 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story so far, Kristen. Good job with your characterizations. Keep up the Frantastic work. :-D |