that was sweet... and well written

That's strangely sweet, even if it is dark. I feel all fuzzy, for no apparent reason.

The last line, of Lupin's, is just wonderful - a lovely diffusing of the entire mess. I like it. I like how Snape seems to be hallucinating Black's words as much as he is hearing what's really there. It's strange and gorgeous, and I adore your narrative voice - it flows so well. I really like it. ^_^

‘I’m not him.’
‘I don’t want you to be.’
oh that was lovely, especially the ending. these two lines i just adored.

I liked that. You write Snape angst wonderfully well.

mm. I like the style. Was expecting a more depressing ending, but damn cute anyway. ^_^

Oh, I adore this, it's beautiful!

i dont know what to say- i know i enjoy it and agree..but i guess my mind is just in such confusion over something else that it clouds over everything. but being short..what can one really make but to agree as i do. so thanks- it was good.

Wow! Amazing!
I totally adore it! It's wonderful, and, dare I say, haunting. ;)
Thank you so much!