Wow...powerful stuff. Beautifully written, but such heartbreak! Poor Sydney.

great story, i always love your stories

nice read for fans. now i truely understand why so many of his/hers are listed as my favs. a great story by a great author.

Pity it was just a dream.

I enjoyed this whole fic- very well done. But how could you let Miss Parker just... trick Sydney like that! I'm feeling really sorry for him at the moment.

So was it just a Sydney dream or did Mr Dead-Man-Walking get to Miss Parker and Broots? Excellent story, just like the first.

This was GREAT! My only complaint (have to have one of these) is there wasn't enough Jarod. ;)

Great story! Very well done! Just one thing...I hate to be picky, but they're sweepers, not cleaners!

Okay now was just wonderful.

excellent! But the ending was a suprise...the "it was all a dream" bit...I'm still not sure that Miss Parker is not Sydney's daughter...good topic to explore.

Liked it very much and read it through quickly, wanting to know what happened. Strong emotions here.