this was great really liked.

I have just started watching this show on Netflix and found this FanFic. This is seriously GOOD. You truly NAILED the characters, from their speech to their mannerisms. As I read the story, I could see the characters acting out the words. I just have to say, you're very talented and I'm excited to read the rest of the chapters.

I hated to come to the end of this. Kurt is a total arse. Shelly is awesome and I'm reduced to one liners...

Alright let's start again, I thoroughly enjoyed the road trip loved the descriptions of Yellowstone and the wierd tourist attractions along the way. I thought YES when Felicity semi confronted Kurt, I think it was neccesary.

This was fantastic because life doesn't always go smoothly there's always bumps in the road, there always stupid misunderstandings and I like how you've dealt with that.

I never wanted this to end :(

this makes me feel... I remember having moments like this when cursed by thoughts you look at someone and in that moment it all falls into place and believing in love, in perfection is easy.

God you captured it perfectly. Kudos

this is great I think I've come across this before, good writing always leaves residual footprints! anyways I needed to review to tell you I love this, the writing, character description, plot. I love Hero Ben I love that he got protective of her and it gave me warm fuzzies. I enjoyed the first well second kiss and Ben's impulsiveness definitely something that he would do.

Fantastic :)

Just had to tell you how glad I am for finding this story. I love FAB! It's been way too long since I've experienced their connection. This chapter was great. You nail their awkward sexual tension so well. It brings me back to the good ol days! -Rece

You write extremely well. I loved the story and how the voices of the characters were consistent with the characters that I have come to love from the TV show. I would love to read more of your work.

This was an awsome story! I am off to see if you have written anything else that will strike my fancy!

I am very impressed with the story. You write well and I really enjoyed the story. Keep up the good work.

I think you're an awesome writer! I can actually picture this on Felicity. Well done.

This was absolutely the best story I have read on the site. I would love for you to write some more on FAB.

gosh that is oNe of the best written stories i've heaRd..! can't wait for another one P

GREAT fic. I really enjoyed it.

Enjoyed reading this story about Felicity and Ben's summer trip! Despite the inconsistencies you mentioned at having not seen season 3, I think the story flowed really well! I just love their relationship and your take on it really kept me reading! Write more!

You finished it! Bravo, Caleon! I throughly enjoyed every chapter. One little thing bothers me: I really wanted Ben to kick Kurt's you-know-what...he certainly had enough reason...what with all the nasty, mean things Kurt said about Felicity...and you know Ben's temper...well, just one time...if he coulda just punched him one time, that would have shut him up and probably brought Ben to his senses sooner...otherwise your story was sensational...I hope you are planning more episodes...Here's an idea (not that you need one, with your talent): How about a story about what F and B did during Christmas Break of the last season...you know, they had just gotten back together after Ben's Dad's surgery...the last scene of that episode has F and B and all the others walking home from the Winter Dance...F and B are happy again...Any ideas?