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winter gurl
2006-04-25 . chapter 10
yay i got thanked! i luved the last line lol so funny! too bad its over ur welcome for the reviews btw. keep writing stuff like this it's freakin awesome! :-p lol
billy
2005-05-15 . chapter 1
2 short
winter gurl
2005-03-30 . chapter 8
haha.funny so far. i cant wait to see what happens next! update soon
Parker
2004-12-11 . chapter 1
Yeah,I watched that episode of Fairly OddParents too!
Chibified Youkai 101
2004-10-28 . chapter 7
dude, this story is awsome, updte ASAP ill be waiting
Candy the Duck
2004-08-20 . chapter 7
wierd
DH88
2004-08-20 . chapter 7
One word pretty much sums up this fic...
Funny. There, I said it. Funny. lol, update soon! :D
DBZAngelX
2004-08-20 . chapter 7
LoL, good chapter. Trunks is crazy. I liked the part with Vegeta and Goku fighting over the toy! ^_^ Update soon! Congrats for Pumpkin!
Wiggle-Chicken
2004-08-19 . chapter 6
Wow! Sounds even more like my "Attack of theKiller Wiggle-Chicken" story now. The evil vilen in that is sposed to be a little on the dumb side too, but the evil vilen has a reason, there blond! Like me! Yes it's true I'm blond and I look like android 18, DAVEANNA, and I'm proud of it! BLAH! ^_^ But they're not as bad as this little army man, as in not as stupid. ^_^ Well, I guess when your brain's made of plastic, ya can't help it. ^_^
Wiggle-Chicken
2004-08-19 . chapter 5
Lets out a snort for a chortel. ^_^ It has to be now that Vegeta even played with it. Gohan and Goku is one thing, but Vegeta's a whole nother story. ^_^
Wiggle-Chicken
2004-08-19 . chapter 4
Hum, Hum. ^_^ Cricet. ^_^ If it were me, it would be Gimanie Cricet! ^_^ I love Disney! ^_^ It's like Smegal with the presious. ^_^
Wiggle-Chicken
2004-08-19 . chapter 3
Kind-a reminds me of my story "Attack of the Killer Wiggle-Chicken". ^_^ It's like the army man has some sort of power over anyone who touches/plays with it. Like it puts them in a trance. ^_^
Wiggle-Chicken
2004-08-19 . chapter 2
Yet again another cute chapter. ^_^ I read in your Bio that you're back in school. (whinces) So sorry. ^_^ I don't start until September 8th. ^_^
Wiggle-Chicken
2004-08-19 . chapter 1
Hey, it's Wiggle Chicken! ^_^ Hey, sorry it took me so long to finally get to reading one of your stories like you asked me to, but, it's a weird story. ^_^ About a month or so ago, I remembered that I had a reviewer that wanted me to read their story (s), so I went to go look for it, but, I don't really understand what happened. ^_^ Somehow, I got messed up with my reviewers, and ended up reading the wrong reviewer's story! ^_^ It's weird. I mean, how did I get GokuLover21 mixed up with you. ^_^

Anyways, cute story so far, and it's nice and short, I like it. ^_^ I always prefer chapters sort-a on the short side when it comes to commedies. Not if it's a drama though, short chapters like this in a drama would absolutly drive me mad! ^_^ I like the whole cerial idea, and Gohan's reactuion too. ^_^ I'd do the same thing if I came home from school one day and my little sister was all happy and telling me that she got a new box of cerial. ^_^ No to mention the fact that I get out of school an entire hour before her school gets out. ^_^
Candy the Duck
2004-08-04 . chapter 6
lol suger good suger make me happy!
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