Short, but sweet. I was really hoping you were going to expand on the story more, maybe getting them off the mountain and into the green valleys below, developing their relationship. Well, if you do ever expand the story, I'll read it. ;)

Love the story. Both, this one and Penpals, are really good. i was reading your profile and i think you should write a crossover with star wars and young hercules. it would be cute.

This is great.I love stories in which luke and vader are forced to work together.

lovely! go on...