Great work. It´s sad that this story isn´t continued. Please, if you are out there, finish this fic.

this is awesome!

I love this story, since it's been some time since I've read a decent story on this matter, and with this specific pairing :D

Dear God Man...

This has to be the BEST Keitaro/Kaolla pairing work of fiction I have read so far. I know it has been a year or something since you have updated, but please update this.

The story just enthralls you, its perfect to say the least. I hope that you can update this over summer...

I'll be waiting^_^
(and I don't like to wait =P)

Wow!Great storyline!
the part about the legend was cool too!

I like this story, you write it well. Since you've made it a large possiblitiy make it a Kei/Su, not a Su goes after Kei but Naru gets him anyway.

please update! love the story!

Woo! Great story you got so far

Hope you update soon!

RARGH. Please update. This fic is great - well written, well thought out and all-around an excellent read. I look forward to more updates.

Great story, are you still writing?

Cool, I love the stories that feature Kaolla. She is my favorite Character!

I've only read the first chapter, but i'm hooked. Don't worry I'll finish it soon. But for now I have to go.

-B

Amazing story! I can see this story has a lot of potential to it! Keep up the good work and I noticed in your profile you are updating this fic so i'm relieved that this is not a dead fic!

Awesome! Must...read...more! Please update soon!

I like the Su/Keitaro pairing ^.^

Good Good Story. Excellent. From a technical stance, this is great. Spelling and grammar are perfect.

From a Content viewpoint, this also excells. The plot is excellent, characters are well done, and the way you delve into Su's heritage is really good. It's very imaginative. I do agree with your bit about mixing fantasy and the logic behind it. It can hurt a story if done incorrectly.

Lastly, It focuses around Kaolla Su, so it's gotta be good...hehe. Great Job, but make sure to update sometime or another.

YOU! UPDATE NOW! OR DIE! IN A HOTEL FIRE!

But seriously, I REALLY wanna read more of this. @_@ I just love Kei/Kaolla pairing for some reason.

Ahh nice long chapters. Thats how more people should make there stories. But besides that this story is getting more interesting the more I read it. Usually Im a pretty patient person but once Im interested in something I can get pretty impatient. Oh nice chapter and hope to see an update soon.