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| skizo akito 2005-10-19 ch 1, | abusewhoa nice story yo! i cant wait to see more of it. and yeah i was wondering if i could see your friend's art that inspired this fic. if thats alright... anyways great story and keep it up yo! |
| FangxStryfe 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseHeh... Nirvana... Kurt Cobain... Noice. Very good start. Very dark. The cutting part was what started to seal who it was. I thought at first with the "lazy **" remark it might be Rikku, but lo and behold... It's Paine! Medication was a good touch too. Keep it up! I wanna read more!! |
| Jessipher Firate 2005-05-12 ch 1, | abuseOh my god. When will you write more? So, right? right? Right?? I loved it! You have to write more, please? Only thing you can do to improve the story is go into even more depth of Paine's daily routine. I love this story dearly and will print it off to read it forever and ever when you are done. |
| Noir Kitsune 2004-10-24 ch 1, | abuseo! Please continue! ne way, great fic. I read like every1 of your painexrikku fics today (There was nothing to do so I was stuck inside (not to b an insult) and i really really like them! please continue! i really wana c wat happens! |
| StaciaAndAriesMcDohl 2004-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThanks a lot! Now you got me hooked! *giggles* Update soon hon, can't wait to see how this one progresses. |
| Anime-freak-4life 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abusehey i like it, but what's up with the scars? is Rikku cuttin herself? |
| Raine Asyllum 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abuseLove it it is the best thing i have red i love it hee hee i luv your stories cant wait for more and again i luv them ^-^ hee hee |
| Misty Wildfire 2004-05-08 ch 1, | abuseOkay. So one: I love it already lol and I do agree normal highschool fics are just...peposturous lol i htink i butchered that word. 2: I wanna see the piccy ^^; 3: why do you call it rikku/paine/rikku? lol im done |
| trh 2004-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseLooks promising, I'm looking forward to the next part. |
| Witch-Hunter 51 2004-05-04 ch 1, | abuseVery nice I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Rambeltilx 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWe! So glad you got this up. ^-^ I love what you have so far, and I must read more. >_>; |