Such a cute story! I luv it!... Can't wait for the nxt chappy :)

I loved this story! You absolutely have to update, I can't wait to read the next chapter. I have nothing to critique!

Ha thats what he gets

luv it plz update soon ^_^

cutiecharm

ja ne

HEYA. MY NAME IS KAIRI. IT TOOK A FEW DAYS TO READ THIS... BUT I HAV A SUGGESTION.. WHEN INUYASHA GETS HOME... SUMTHIN SHOULD BE FUN TO INTRODUCE TO HIM... LIKE... RAMEN! THAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN IN THERE A WHILE AGO. LOLZ. MAYBE WHEN THEY SHOP NEXT TIME, THEY GO FOR RAMEN! MUHAHAHA... CHAOS WOULD BEGIN THERE... LOLZ. CANT BLAME HIM THOUGH.. I LIKE RAMEN! SO, ANYWAYZ, UR A REAALY GOOD WRITER. KEEP IT UP!

~KAIRI~

Heyy that was a great story and it was great and I hope you write more chappies!! ^^

I love this story! It's awesome! UPdate soon!Cant wait for ur next update!

that is such a good story. please update soon.

lol, kag is getting suspicious o.O

It's so good. Please update soon.

love ya

punk lover
out !_! ~_^ @_@ *_$ O

^o^ ^_^ wonderful

Hey, Alli-chan... can't email you right now, I'm in school. (I get out on Friday) But i'm willing to take some of your fics over...

Kyla

hurry up with the next damn chapter please i love our story

OH that was so cute!

swet!you rock so damb ** hard and keep writing i want to see at least 1 weddig and koga being VERY jealous!and ...gr..with 4 rs!(i got that from a friend)