Um hello..not one of your best works? **smacks you** This was great..I thought I was wacthing an ep of the show..more..darn it I want more...

--PT

I'm sorry. If I had known you wanted more of Hakkai, I would have inspired you to do so. If you haven't guessed, I'm a muse; correction, The Muse. I am Satan's personal muse, but I like fic writers so I help them a bit on the side. You wrote this very well, and all on your own; aside from the original prompting, of course. This is written very well, not a single grammatcal error to be seen. You got the personalities just right and I commend you for that. Many praises,
Gonou.
(You may no believe it, but that's my real name. I got interested in Saiyuki because my friend told me a character's old name was Gonou. Go figure.)

A-are you sure that this is your first? Wow! Impressive! It really made me think and I'm not a person who contemplates every day! BravO. Make another one!

update... :D