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shampoo147
2009-11-25 . chapter 21
The scene with Dumbledore made me cry. I know that's horrible, but all the stuff with Harry and Severus didn't but Dumbledore's predicament was what made me bawl.
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-23 . chapter 19
Dear Lord...I suppose that's Jonathan Frost for you isn't it?

Leaving everything like it was supposed to happen -_-

Dear Lord.
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-23 . chapter 18
I've being hearing the Goldberg Variations (all of them) since you mentioned them in the previous chapter. I had heard the piano version...but my god. With the music I really felt like I was there, watching the jester playing that and then Tom Riddle caressing Severus with his eyes *melts* And now I've been hearing a lot of Bach music with this single chapter.

It fits like...like. I don't know, it just fits. Gorgeous and dark, my favorite :B

Eileen is something special isn't she?

I'm also strangely hurt about Lestrange's death, he was really cool abut submissive and so so broken, so dark and beautiful.

No one is more beautiful than Severus though, your really make him gorgeous *sighs*
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-23 . chapter 17
The best chapter yet. It made me so giddily happy *grins wolfishly*

Excellent, dark, beautiful, magnificent; the details, the masquerade, Voldemort's beauty and his lust for Severus is so gah, wow *shudders* Completely gorgeous.

You just don't know how I waited, leaving short reviews and reading like a wild animal eating a banquette *sighs*
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-23 . chapter 16
Oh dear lord *stares*

Sorryihavetogotoreadthenextchapter
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-23 . chapter 15
I really would like to squeal! But hey I'm a girl; that's no excuse but *melts*

Not even the kiss can dismiss my love for this new murgurgle plant, it's awesum :B

No! Actually I liked more the kiss. It was chaste but dear lord! How do you do it?

Regarding the future...recruitment, I can't wait, so I'll be going now.

Sorry for now making any sense, but this is getting better and better.

One last thing, I like the way you still refer of Harry as Harry, it makes me feel a sense of security after all the storms of crazy things going on.
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-22 . chapter 14
I almost didn't leave a review...it was just that good.

Damn Sirius for interrupting. I always though wizards were beyond homophobia, I mean we have black pure bloods; and creatures and well you know what I mean, or maybe it was just the fact the it happen to be Harry just a breath apart from Severus *drool*

Excellent chapter. Chris is really cool too :B
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-22 . chapter 13
My God, that was perfect. I still have many doubts about Tom and Harry...well I have to read more if I'm going to know if this hard delicious feelings are Harry's or Tom's or damn!
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-22 . chapter 12
God...you have me frantic here! Damn Severus for being so, so damn stubborn. He really should have been in Gryffindor, maybe even more that Harry (before all that happened, it's quite obvious his first strand of sanity broke when Ron died, I'm proud of him for restraining Tom so well)

I love the way you manage to infuse Tom in some of the things Harry says; imperceptible if one doesn't know where to look. And I'm not talking about his little behavior regarding those Muggles in London (that was obvious) but everything else, it's absolutely gorgeous.

Also, all those ears ago, you were my first introduction to Yeats :B He is quite amazing.
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-22 . chapter 11
Maybe I should go find some words to describe this :B

It was truly magical, though Tom and Harry are getting more jumbled aren't they? It's quite disheartening (Leave Harry alone! :B) The chapter was just yummy, I think for all its gorgeousness, my favorite part was when Harry jumped on the bed *dreamy sigh*

Why all your characters are so gorgeous?
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-22 . chapter 10
Now that's what I was talking about...romance O.o And they are not even in the same bed *dreamy sigh* Harry seems to have a hard time controlling his emotions. Though I don't know if his feelings are his or Tom's or what the hell. I doubt Tom has any interest aside of his lust for Severus, and you seem to describe the feelings in more ways than one. It seems like attraction, longing, protection and maybe a spark of puppy love; unless Tom Riddle is capable of those feelings...that would be hot as hell, specially if they are directed towards Severus. But then those feelings, obviously, would be from Tom and not Harry at all...or maybe they are feeling the exact same and wouldn't that be great *weary sigh* I'm rambling...

Beautiful as always.
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-22 . chapter 9
WOOHOO!! *punches air*

Now finally we have Severus back on track, Jamie and doggy to his doom and Harry being a bad drunk :B

Excellent chapter, the darkness spilling out of it is almost tangible I tell you! Beautifully dark, though a little sad to know that most of the feelings Harry has for Severus are just part of Voldie's. Tom lusting after Severus is strangely satisfying and hot though. Imagine, Harry and Tom lusting after poor beautiful broken Severus Snape.

Wow...*sighs*
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-22 . chapter 8
Dude...you know, most of the time I feel really uncomfortable when reading about Harry not being entirely Harry, I'm like "omg don't touch baby Harry" Buy hey, the story is awesome, and the chapter is smooth and sensual and full of Harry thinking about Sev *dreamy sigh* He is really petty, Severus.

You don't know, but you were my introduction to the sweet, sensual, forbidden world of Snarry.

This was actually the first Snarry I've ever read.
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-21 . chapter 7
The chapter was long, beautiful, dark and thick just like Severus' eyelashes *sighs*

Now you are giving us more clues about Harry's dreams and his inexplicable but very delicious interest in Severus...it's a good thing that his interest seems to come more from the fact that Severus it's just to curious and mysterious than for...well you know about what else *shudders* I still feel kind of weird when I knew what that silver entity entering in Harry's body was for. I feel hollow thinking about it.

Severus makes it all better though.

Except when it comes to Dumbledore *sighs again* He makes me ache, I'm sure that if I were subjected to one of his cold stares I would run to die somewhere...well not die, but weep like a girl (which I am O.o)

I'm not so sure but now that the seven book is out we know that Severus and Lily were best friends and all, but as I see the year you wrote this maybe you could clear the basis in which you wrote the particular parts in where Severus and Lily are in the same place. Were they friends? You make it sound like they were but at the same time they weren't but they were...I forgot about that detail. Lily seems to know Severus really well, and Severus seems too bitter when talking about her. So...just to clear that up.
Vine Verrine.
2009-11-21 . chapter 6
Pure win.

I ache for Harry, and Severus and poor Lily because damn, she is so innocent, I never liked James Potter, canon or otherwise, but yours is kinda cool. even if he is an utter prick!!

Severus is yummy in a really subjective and artful way, ha makes me heart ache too *sighs tearfully*

Damn him for being so...god! Lestrange's description is right *sighs*

Beautiful.
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