Wow... I'm speechless. _ Amazing work! Keep it up!

I like this poem! Simple but it has a good flow of words to it. Keep up the good work! _ Just to let you know, my poem 'Her angel, his goddess' is back on the site if you want to have a look. Keep doing your stuff!

umm...it was alright I guess. There's definetly rhythm in it. what's with the n-never and i-imature though? And the caps on alot of the words are : But "AH to them I’ll show" doesn't really have any meaning behind it, in my view. You've still got to work a little harder but I think you have great potential as a poet. Keep up the good work!

Not bad! You're a pretty good poet. Keep up writing in general, you hold a lot of promise.

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Hm. I liked it, though my taste and knowledge of poetry is a little lacking. Hope I can read more later.