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| Luna 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo sad yet so sweet...*sobs uncontrolably* |
| princess-oro 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, this story is just so beautiful. Usually, I don't really like first-person POV but the way you write it and the structure makes it so poignant. Not to mention that the content it so breathtaking. I truly enjoyed reading this. Thank you. |
| Jen 2008-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseArgh! Kishimoto should've written it this way! I like this version much better. |
| cherubchan 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWow so touching! Nice! ^^ |
| money apple 2007-09-15 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that is a really plousable theory, if there really was a reson he killed them all you would be the first to get it rights |
| Moth Gypsy 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseA very interesting and certainly plausible theory. Though, I think this version of Itachi is... too noble for my taste. I like him evil. But this was fun to read, I do so love to hear diferent views on him, cause really no one can say for sure whats actualy going on in his mind, cept for maybe Kishimoto XD |
| Garowyn 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseExcellent work. I haven't yet found out the real reason about why Itachi did what he did (haven't been keeping up with Naruto as much), but this sounds good, too. I enjoyed reading it. |
| PiratePickle 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was...amazing. |
| iLychLuna 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. I love the way you portrayed his character. And it gave us a new insight of his charcter and what he did to his clan. Very well written. This is going to be added on my fav list. Good Luck on your writing. Luna |
| Kinkosami 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautifuly written. I wish I could write like you! :D This is a very good idea, it seems you thought it through very hard. I too have considered ideas like this, and others, to try and explain why he killed the entire clan, with the exception of Sasuke. But I'm not so sure this works. If Itachi was afraid of Orochimaru getting his family's power, why wouldn't he just kill Orochimaru, instead of his family? That would make more sense. Unless, you go the rout of "Itachi is insane" then any type of "logic" he comes up with will work. Because he's crazy. :D But anyway, nice fic. You have mad writing skilz, I wish I could write as well as you do. :) -Kinkosami |
| deity of death1 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseWow... I'm just... speechless. Wow. |
| ineXpressible 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuse*OMG LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!* POOF toodles TJ word up. |
| NanamiYatsumaki 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abuseTHAT ROCKED! XD Great GREAT job...^-^ it was soo passionate and such...and i completey agree with ur idea..thats how i look at it too! |
| blisblop 2005-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa...kinda radical but he is the genius.When was the massacre explained?who when what where how why?Jeez tell me?Or where to read about it. jeez... |
| Citatus 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abuseDownright brilliant. I have always wanted to see a fic that delves deep into the mind of Itachi, and you pulled it off brilliantly. I loved how you made Itachi not just a mass murderer, but a murderer with good intentions inside. Also, I loved how you entwined Sasuke into there. Good Job! |