Hello again! I'm back to tell you that this version is just perfect - so don't change it. ;)

well if that's how your fics are when they're 'ruff' I look forward to reading a complete one. Really, that was good, I wish my complete stories would turn out like your ruff ones.

Wow... This is deep... I love it! You should write more stuff like this. ;)

confusing? i understood it! i really relate to this...sometimes i dunno what i wanna do...*ahem* ignore that, this was great! _;;;; this is going in my favs!

Wow! This is really good, kind of makes you think! This is very well written and it's pretty insightful too. Excellent job!

interestingly disturbing...hehe

Ya know, I read a poem about the dead being jealous of the living, and even though it was an excellent poem, this wonderfully-written fic agrees more with my views. I loved it. And I would nominate my own fic(s) if I wasn't such a pathetic writer.

i like the line no wonder the dead is so unhappy. very strange story i must admit, but i like!

This was incredibly sad *wah!* and so beautiful. A serious and philosophical look into Folken's inner psyche-fascinating! I'm done!...almost just wanted to thank you for continually putting forth flawless reads!

oh my god, you are good. Consider writing a book