Viginettes on the Longbottoms. Always painfully beautiful in its misery. Lovely.

Lovely. The end is very bittersweet. Anything about the Longbottoms is good, and this especially.

If I pay you can you teach me how to write like that? I'll even throw in a pair of scissors or something. Please?

Quite amazing. Written from the pov of a madwoman, yet utterly understandable and believable. You portray Alice as having no real grasp on reality, yet somehow manage to write something coherent. All I can say is, once again, amazing. And wonder what list you got this challenge from, because the link didn't show up.

I'm really, thorougly impressed and floored by this. Not only is it a subject that I never bothered to think deeply on, but you execute it all beautifully

Aw! Poor Alice. She's one of my favorite characters. This is very well written. I loved it. Excellent job.

Wow, this is great! I really liked it! Great imagery and everything!
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- Selah!