Great job! I really liked it...needed some little things but other than that it was very good. Watch the use of the "F word" because this is a PG-13 story and you can only use the word once in PG-13's.
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I love you, nice chapter, update soon.

hehe I loved that chapter...the only thing that I didn't like was how it suddenly ended but other than that it was great. Love ya *does a happy dance*

*raises hand* I think I know what Marc is thinking! Good chapter, that A.p.R. rocks!

This was very good, I liked the first half of i much. The month skips was weird but that was very good two. hurry up and update.

HEHE! Smut...Smut...Smut...hehehe. That was very kick **. Now, follow with your other reviewers, I'm horny...and I need to take a ice cold shower...wait...maybe two ice cold showers. That was really hot! WoOt!

Wow, that was very raw. I like it. Good details.

That was hot, really, you did a good job with this. It was one of the best chapters of this storie. Im going to take a cold shower. ;)

Well...I'm horney.

I loved this. I thought it was awesome and even though there were some parts that were confusiing it was good.

A.p.R.: WoOt! That was long! Very long! Very long! Very long! Very long! Very long! Very...line!
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Stage Manager: *clears throat*...long!
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A.p.R.: Oh yeah...LONG! I like it, it's awesome. I liked the fight scene, it was pretty good. *kisses you* Certain parts of it are very discriptive...I'm too lazy to correct that word's spelling. I like it...VERY LONG! It took me a while to read it. Good job, luv.

That was freakishly long! But darn good!

Really good. I like it. Update son.

Delano...as in FDR or is it said differently? In any case, i liked it good. Update soon.

I hope Des is alright!

This is getting interesting. I got confused at this part: "He remembered how he acted towards her last night and now he didn't feel that attractive towards her like that but was still though." but other than that, I really thought it was a pretty kickin' chapter!