Ouch, poor Vincent. Well, he was using a lot of curse words. Not really a broad vocabulary. Heheheheh. Anyway, this rules. Your dialogue kicks **, and your characterization is awesome. Never really read anything that went so deeply into his character. Nice work.

Very nice! I'd have spent more time explaining what the heck was going on between Lucrecia and Vincent but I love the beginning in particular. Lovely job.

And all was silent...

Ah to end it all so easily just like that. The emotion Hojo expressed within this was once again poignant.. So sure that the project would go his way, only for Vincent's horror to come true. Your illustration of this causes me to weep all over again.. And such a perfect song to sum it all up with as well..

-Seraphim your Emotionally Driven Turk

Loverly loveliness! -Hugs Hojo to pieces.- So sweet. And I am so Pro-Vincent abuse! Keep it coming! XD

Wow...fantastivc is all I can say. A little profanity heavy, expecially near the end, but who cares. I look forward to the next part.

That's a striking first half.