lol, good story thought you need more writting and less song...well the same amount of song really just more writting. strange rant at the end :P

U say that this story was another depressing one when i honestly think that it was quite moving. You did a really good job on this.

In such a situation that is almost the inevitable conclusion... poor, poor Malfoy. Although he's not, really, Malfoyish here. I was just thinking about it, and coming up with these following possible family creeds:

1) Survive (this gives them nastiness and egocentricity)
2) Never think or act as if you were ever NOT going to survive (this gives them style and arogance).

But the 'suicide note' explains the difference, and I thought it was very well done - the way Draco and his father had different views as regards Draco's failure.

*looks down at author's notes*. Hm. I think this message fulfils all criteria.. *slightly sardonic look* I hadn't realised there was a message to me here, before.

cool! Angsty, but cool. And it fits that song incredibly well... It would have been interesting if his father found him, though, and demanded that he be healed so that he could kill him again. But do not(I beg of you), I repeat, NOT make it some soppy piece of writing with Lucius getting all crybaby-ish coz Draco died. It's cliche and demeaning to the name of Malfoy. Or any other name, for that matter.