awwwww, that was sweet. good good, i liked it

good story, hope you'll write more

Beautiful. Poignant with a sadness so...pure that it's sweet. But WHY aren't they allowed to love each other? WHY? Yah..yeah..I know. Annakin might get pissed and all that...phhhhbbbbt...

Yes! I've been searching for some time now to find an Obi/Ami fan fic that was written to perfection. My search is now over, Thank you. Keep up the good work

Wow. Wow! That was just fantastic. Exactly how I would imagine any kind of romance happening between them. You have no idea how much I would love to see that exact scene in Episode II or III! :-) Great job, that was truly beautiful.

Yeah! I was looking for this one too...man girl you are amazing hehehe I wish I had good ideas like this...

OOOhhhh, so so so so good, and mushy, and good.He is taken aback, but still pleased for he responds the way I hoped. He kisses me back and grips me tighter. I run my hand through his short blonde hair and sigh. The wind blows through my balcony windows and rustles the chiffon curtains around us. He slides his hands down my waist and stops at my lower back. I feel his tongue licking my tear-moistened lips and get the hint. I open my mouth slightly and feel his tongue toy with mine. My heart races and my head pounds. Why is my room spinning? I moan as his mouth leaves mine and moves to my neck. His hands wander across my body and I caress his neck. He brings his lips back to mine and kisses me deeply again. Pushing me against the wall, he pins my arms and kisses me harder.

AAAAAHHHHHHH! I can't tell you how much I love this, Candy! I've not visited the SW fanfiction category becuase I'm a zelda fanfiction fan, but I am a Star Warsie first and foremost (I dressed up as Amidala for halloween last year... and i'm 18! The year before I was Leia, adn my mom was C3P0, and my dad was Vader!) The whole time I watched TPM, I had this strange feeling that there SHOULD be something between obi and ami. (Partly because Obi is so good-looking... but that's beside the point!) This story is SO excellent, Candi. Could we see more Obi-ami relationship stories from you?

Ah, yes. The fist fic I've every read by you. I remember the day clearly . . . I'll never look at my chiffon curtains on my window the same way again. )

Great first fanfic! Truely beautiful and touching. small note: Obi-Won is spelled Obi-WAN Kenobi. there are small grammatical errors but that's to be expected with the first fanfic, but otherwise it's wonderful. Keep up the good work.

*tear* That was cool! Ive only read your Zelda fics! But this is just as good!

remember:

Link and Malon rule!

Waaaaaaaaaaaa. Sabe! You shouldn't have come in at that time!

Excellent story! It's very sad though. Very well written

OH WOW! MORE MORE ENCORE! that was one of the best obi/ami fan fics i've read! great keep up tthe good work! write more

Great job! That was really good, keep up the good work. :)