Even after after almost ten years after it was completed, I still find myself going back to read this story. I'm not even into Sailor Moon or DBZ anymore! It's still a wonderful story.

awsome job keep up the excelent work with your stories

I can't believe I havn't already reviewed this.

I first found it on Lady Cosmos's fanfiction pages and must have read it several times. It's a brilliant story, well told, even if it does get a bit convoluted at times. One thing I would have liked was more diferentiation when the plot time skips forward, but that's a minor niggle.

I love how you made the transition of Usagi from cry-baby to badass convincing, though evil Rae and Mamoru felt a bit off. Involving Ranma shouldn't have worked, but did, and the Usagi/Picolo romamce was nicely done.

This was one of the inspirations for my own power-up fic, 'Training Tails', where Miles Prower (Sat AM version) cheering section and kidnap bait, gets dropped through a dimensional portal to Dragonball Earth and hooks up with Goku just as he's going to get training from Master Roshi... hilarity and power-ups ensue. And that isn't the only place he's going to visit... grin

I even give your link in my introductory notes, along with 'Shinji Warhammer 40K'.

Thank you for writing this.

Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!

I've read this se3veral times before and I never get tired of doing so. I was wondering though if you have a link to the uncensored verson of this. I could have sworn that I had a link to it but I can't find it. If it's no longer up do you think you could send me in a word attachment. Thanks.

The best fanfic. I love it. Well, when you include Ranma characters it became a little loonger. But all the training and how Usagi fall in love with Piccolo is the best. Congratulalions!

nice

great story

I Love The Story!

AH! I love this story. Kinda old... I read it years ago and never reviewed. *bluch* Sorries. But I've reread it and It makes me go "Yes! Coolios!" This is the only Usagi/Piccolo pairing I have ever seen. People seem to like to hook up Setsuna with Piccolo. Oh, well. Larania Drake, you are on my favorites list. Woot!

that was awesome

That whole story was bloody amazing. I love how you inserted yourself at the end, and the narrative about no happy endings is very good. It really makes you look at life differently in the end. Your characterization of Mamoru was excellent as well. I love the internal conflict he, as well as Usagi faces through out the story. It makes them very realistic and easy to relate to. At first, I thought adding in Ramna 1/2 was going a bit to far, but you really made it work. I have to admire your expertise. You took a usually static character and gave him a real soul. That is the sign of a true writer.

That, was the most amazing baby trunks story ever. It was so emotional and moving.

This story was... hehe... well, it was interesting. Among other things... I must say, well done!

I LURVE IT!